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New Story! ("Human" updates!)

Sat Nov 22, 2008, 1:26 PM
*To all my readers on fanfiction.net, you must read my 'next story' place on my profile, right? Well, if you noticed my newest addition, Human, then you'd love this journal entry.
*I originally wrote this in my Gaia journal, but you couldn't read it 'cause the links are all the same.

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As soon as I got the idea in my head, I blew up. I was enthusiastic and I couldn't wait to start the story. But, I had a small problem. I didn't actually know what was going to happen in 'Human.' All I knew was the plot and nothing else. So, I started writing, and I was happy with the way the first chapter came out. It was kind of like a prologue thingy, but it didn't really suit the story as a prologue, thus, I made it into the first chapter.

Note that this story might be a short story, making it only to the tenth chapter or even less. It depends on the ideas I get. But it might even make it to the twenties, even though none of my stories did make it to the twenties. But I'm pretty sure 'A Different Person' is going to make it to the twenties. I haven't even made Sasuke show signs of love towards Sakura yet, and I'm already at writing chapter 11. (Beta is currently doing her magic on chapter 10.)

This is a vampire story, if you haven't read the plot. (Which will be under this big block of rant.) I'm going to make it totally different from Twilight. Most stories I've read have too many physical resemblance to vampires from Twilight; stunningly beautiful, sparkling skin in the sunlight, no sleeping... etc. But, I'm going to try to make this as different as I can. I don't want to be using other people, namely Stephenie Meyer's, ideas for my stories.

This is the exciting part. I've decided to give you a sneak peek on 'Human' because it won't be posted until I'm absolutely sure that I have ideas for the story; which will probably mean when I'm finished writing the whole story, except for the Epilogue or the last chapter or something. Something along those lines.

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Summary


Two vampire lovers, bound together by their clans' traditions, have learned to love each other; finally. But when Sakura turns eighteen, and her mother tells her she’s only human… she’s afraid her relationship with Sasuke will crumble. “But, Haruno clan is a vampire clan!” SasuSaku.

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Sneak Peek


Sakura’s now long, pink hair fluttered in the wind, her head lying on Sasuke’s chest, his arms around her waist protectively. The sun was setting nicely in front of their eyes; orange dipping into a darker shade of orange. Sasuke ran his hand up and down her side tenderly, making her smile.

“This is nice, huh, Sasuke-kun?” Sakura commented, snuggling closer to Sasuke.

“Hn. Yeah.” Sasuke replied nonchalantly, keeping his eyes locked on the horizon.

Usually, she would pout and whine about how Sasuke didn’t talk enough and he should share more; if they were going to spend the rest of eternity together, then they should communicate more. But this time, she didn’t want to ruin the moment. It felt perfect, that they did belong together. And nothing could tear them apart…

His warm chest (to her) seemed like her heaven as she looked up at his gorgeous face, and she could barely that he was all hers. Like, they were one item. No one believed it either—but for no apparent reason. Because, if you think about it, Sakura is as beautiful and gorgeous as Sasuke and they both have great grades.

Most important of all, they were in the same race.

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If you stare at the summary, or analyze it, you might notice that I said, 'They learned to love each other, finally.' If it makes you guys happy, I might make a prequel. But I think that I'm going to give glimpses of their pasts during the story, that was the original plan, after all. And if you guys like, I'll make like a little oneshot at the end of the story; which is probably going to be like the Epilogue.

  • Mood: Irritated
  • Listening to: Decode - Paramore
  • Reading: Eclipse

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